Strengths:
- Interesting concept, works well with the brand itself!
- Depth in the way of a range of different products
- Considered layout, minimal and effective. Level of crafts, high
- Really like the clothing, texture image and the different items for different nets - works with brand identity of street wear
- Good range used and works well together as a set
- Well made - bag looks like real and theres no evidence of fold guides etc
- Love the zip detail on bag - inventive and creative
Areas for improvement
- Could do with better print quality and stock. Concept could have been developed further
- A thicker textured stock would of looked nice
- The knots of the handle would probably look better inside the bag
- ^^ No, you're wrong
Considerations
- Could have thought further about having the nets and packaging run more fluent as a series. Working better as a stand alone as it is. Could have been more inventive with nets.
- Print the logo on material and stitched on - add depth and texture and also links with the clothing. Love the idea of the stitching on the edges - just would push it further (I think its what you properly wanted to do)
- Could of had flaps for pockets - little additional info on the clothing line such as washing instructions or maybe even a neck label.
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